Aug 3, 2016 19:41
7 yrs ago
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Premium✍️ Aug 6, 2016:
Non Posted Response Bonjour Isabelle,
J'ai répondu immédiatement mais je viens de constater que ma réponse du 2 août n'était pas affichée ! Désolée ! :((
Isabelle Cluzel (asker) Aug 4, 2016:
Since the translation is urgent, I think I am going to follow Tony's and ormiston's intuition and go for something like "A chaque fois, une nouvelle découverte". After all they did not write "now or never". Thanks to everyone!
Isabelle Cluzel (asker) Aug 3, 2016:
I trust your intuition on that one :) I just have a few lines about the museum, nothing special really... Museum of Flight...
Tony M Aug 3, 2016:
@ Asker Rather too engimatic for its own good, I feel! This is pretty difficult for me to make head nor tail of, so not quite sure what a punter is supposed to make of it...
I THINK what they must mean is that the museum is being so constantly updated that you can't use the excuse "I've already seen it", because unless you've actually seen it TODAY, you will have missed something...
Is that the way you understand it too? Is there any further clue in your context, for example, in the general marketing angle they are using?

Proposed translations

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2 hrs
Selected

Le musée de XXX, comme vous ne l'avez jamais encore vu.

Suggestion.
Peer comment(s):

agree Yoann Peyron
25 mins
merci.
neutral mchd : vous ne l'avez ENCORE jamais vu
7 hrs
merci.
agree mimi 254 : "...vous ne l'avez ENCORE jamais vu" as suggested bu mchd
11 hrs
merci.
agree Annie Rigler
11 hrs
merci.
agree Victoria Britten
12 hrs
merci.
neutral Premium✍️ : Désolée mais je crains qu'un fâcheux contresens ne se soit glissé. :)
2 days 23 hrs
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12 mins

Si vous l'avez raté, vous ne le verrez jamais.

Sans avoir plus de contexte.

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Note added at 13 mins (2016-08-03 19:55:09 GMT)
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Si vous l'avez raté, vous ne verriez jamais.
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : I don't think it's quite that way round; note that the s/t is not "you'll never see it", but "you haven't seen it".
4 mins
You are right.
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+1
46 mins

si vous ne le visitez pas maintenant, vous ne le visiterez jamais

suggéré
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : I don't think it's quite that way round; note that the s/t is not "you'll never see it", but "you haven't seen it"
16 mins
agree Premium✍️ : J'aime bien le parallélisme des deux adverbes temporels. J'utiliserais plutôt le futur antérieur ici car le futur simple augure d'une action qui n'a pas eu lieu ni n'est indiquée ici. "Si vous ne ....., vous ne l'aurez jamais visité !".
7 hrs
merci, bonne remarque
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56 mins

venez (le voir) aujourd'hui, sinon vous allez tout rater !

am not a native speaker but this is my stab at it! Agree with Tony as to the meaning, but perhaps it could be made punchier in French:
(style, "ça ne s'attend pas...")
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5 hrs

Vous avez attendu (pour y venir)? // Attendez de voir ce qui vous attend maintenant !

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21 hrs

Excusez du peu, mais une visite s’impose. Dès aujourd’hui.

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-1
1 day 6 hrs

Visiter le musée de XXX, c'est aujourd'hui ou jamais !

My take
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : That in no way accurately reflects the sense of the s/t — and I don't think it would vene be a very good advertising slogan anyway: "Now or never" suggests it is closing or something!
2 hrs
disagree Germaine : Agree with Tony. Ça dit littéralement "Si vous ne l'avez pas vu aujourd'hui, vous ne l'avez jamais vu => rien n'est plus pareil aujourd'hui (et non "c'est votre dernière chance!")
15 hrs
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3 days 30 mins

Visite retardée, Visite ratée !

Suggestions pour une formule brève et plus percutante.
Qqs variantes :
- Visite remise/retardée (aujourd'hui), Visite complètement ratée !
- Une visite différée, c'est une visite ratée !
- Vous ratez tout si vous ne le visitez pas aujourd'hui ! ( un peu plus longuet)

Juste quelques idées qui me viennent rapidement au passage.
Bonne besogne. :)
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