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English term or phrase:
"as the continuance of"
English answer:
in addition to..
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mockingbird (X)
Mar 28, 2005 10:43
19 yrs ago
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English term
"as the continuance of"
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what would work here, "as the continuance of" or as the continuity of" or "as the follow-up of"?
PT Semen Padang (SP) continues to prepare itself to again become the largest manufacturer, and to compete in the global market, and even face a booming in domestic cement market and export market from 2008 to 2009. PT SP has begun to prepare itself in building new plants. If there are no any obstacles and the plan approved by the shareholders, the planned construction of Indarung plant VI will be realized by late 2006 or early 2007 as the continuance of Indarung plants I, II, III, IV and V.
PT Semen Padang (SP) continues to prepare itself to again become the largest manufacturer, and to compete in the global market, and even face a booming in domestic cement market and export market from 2008 to 2009. PT SP has begun to prepare itself in building new plants. If there are no any obstacles and the plan approved by the shareholders, the planned construction of Indarung plant VI will be realized by late 2006 or early 2007 as the continuance of Indarung plants I, II, III, IV and V.
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4 +5 | in addition to.. | Mihaela Brooks |
5 | continuation | petya yakova |
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in addition to..
proofreading..first sentence...
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Mikhail Kropotov
: and the whole thing needs editing severely
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Thanks SirReal...I know it needs editing...wanted to be gentle
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LILIANA HUTANU
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Multumesc Liliana
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Deborah do Carmo
: whole text should at least be revised by a native English linguist in the absence of native English translators for the job, very poor quality.//:-)
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Thanks Deborah
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conejo
: Yes. Also, "no any obstacles" should be changed to "no obstacles"
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Thanks Conejo
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Can Altinbay
: I'm not going to make this an alternative suggestion, beI'm not going to make this a new suggestion, because you're all right - this needs major revision. But how about "to augment" rather than "as the continuance of"?
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Thanks Can...'to augment' is good choice too..
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English term (edited):
in continuation
continuation
editing is more then required but.... I would suggest:
as a next step....
further on.....
followed by.....
as a next step....
further on.....
followed by.....
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